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I get the poem, but it needs a new title. It also needs to be expanded upon, in order for your ideas to get across. This s a good start, ...

The rhyme in this poem is very good. I didn't even see that it was liek that until I reread it. There are two lines that seem out of place. ...

This was very hard to understand, even with the preface, and I'm Christian. While you had some interesting lines and imagery, it didn't hold my attetion. I couldn't get to ...

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I sincerely do not know what this poem is about. It begins first with one voice and one theme and keeps getting more convoluted. There are many good lines, but ...

I didn't get much from this poem. Maybe that's how it was meant to be, just a kind of a fun, quick little piece, in which case disregard everything I ...

Wow, this was really great! There's only two little (nitpicky) things that I saw. One was the "he shouldn't have been born" phrase. Its a good line and is in ...

What an strange poem (in a good way).I love the sort of cavalier, smart-aleck voice its told in, as well as the imagery. That said, in the second verse, it ...

This was a nice poem, but there were some things in it you could improve. First of all, I'll has an apostrophe in it. "ill" means sick, and that doesn't ...

I like this a lot. The lyrical language is a very nice addition to the story, and the way you can't tell if its taking place now or in the ...

Wow, this is really good. My favorite verse was the third one. it just had this sense of muted pain, and it was wonderful. I like the ideas of music ...

This was quite an intersting poem. There aren't many on this subject, its very refreshing. I agree with JordanEmert, though, I prefer because instead of 'cause. Also, I think this ...

I really like this. I agree with Evi, though, that I have mixed opinions about the unique structure and circular language. I love the way it sounds and feels when ...

This is really great. Its very unusual, and a nice breath of clean air from all the starcrossed-lovers type stuff. That said, there were a few things that threw me ...

Sounds cool, if you don;t already have enough i'd be glad to do it.